A chase through Minnesota's Boundary Waters

William Kent Krueger says that writing Fox Creek, the nineteenth of twemty Cork O'Conner novels, was a different experience for him because he wrote the opening scene without knowing the story or where it would go. In earlier O’Conner books, he had a clear idea of the plot, the characters, and the key incidents in the mystery before he began writing. Not only did he not know what was going to happen in Fox Creek, he discovered he was writing a thriller rather than a mystery.

He says that in a mystery the readers and the protagonist are on the same page in terms of what they know about the crime and the clues. Ideally the reader solves the crime along with the protagonist. Sometimes the reader knows long before the detective who killed Roger Ackroyd. Sometimes the detective has to explain everything in the last chapter. 

In a thriller, readers typically know what the villain or villains are trying to do ahead of the protagonist who is trying to stop them. It’s not a question of who done it or why done it but will the protagonists, the people the reader cares about, understand what’s going on in time to prevent it from happening. “What drives a thriller,” he says, “is the suspense.”

In Chapter 1, a stranger hires O'Conner to find his missing wife, Dolores Morriseau, only reasonable because Cork is a licensed private investigator in Tamarack County in northern Minnesota. This is the fictional gateway to the pristine Boundary Waters Canoe Area Wilderness, a million acres of deep forest, a thousand lakes, and a few quiet towns. 

Within a few pages we learn that the stranger is not who he says he is; the woman he wants is on the run; Dolores, Cork's wife, and Henry Meloux, an elderly Ojibwa healer and woodsman have escaped into the wilderness; and three very bad men are chasing them and very bad things will happen to them if they're caught.

There are a couple mysteries: where is Dolores's husband? Why are the thugs willing to kill Cork's wife and Henry to capture Dolores? What's going on aside from Henry trying to keep the two women and himself alive? Henry knows the wilderness, but one of the three bad guys is a renegade tracker who also can read the wilderness—and is much younger than Henry.

To write much more risks spoiling Fox Creek for other readers, and I don't want to do that. I agree with Krueger that the book is more thriller than mystery. Yes, we don't know why the bad men want Dolores and her husband, but it almost doesn't matter. How will the villains be brought to justice? Read Fox Creek and find out.

Engaging fiction from 100 words to 20 pages

Grant Faulkner's 2021 collection of short stories, All the Comfort Sin Can Provide, has only 130 pages but 28 titled stories. They therefore range in length from twenty pages to a paragraph which might in some works be considered prose poems. He says in an Author's Note that he wrote the first in 1991, the last just before the manuscript was due to the publisher.

Faulkner is the former executive director of National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo), the co-founder of the online literary journal 100 Word Story,  the co-host of the podcast Write-minded, and an executive producer of the TV show, America's Next Great Author.

100 Word Story publishes stories that are exactly 100 words long. Stories published in 100 Word Story have been included on Wigleaf’s Top (Very) Short Fictions list and anthologized in the annual Best Small Fictions series and W.W Norton's New Micro: Exceptionally Short Fiction. Here is an example Faulkner titled Life Knowledge:

"She searched for the perfect place to live. She changed her name from Clara to Claire She drank one too many cups of coffee and then one too few. She painted porcelain dolls, then learned how to play the banjo. She made a promise in her diary never to get Botox. She asked, "Why do people hate the French?" She carried a pistol in her purse for protection, shampooed with anti-lice shampoo just in case. She tossed bread crumbs to golden carp and watched them mouth silent O's in the water. Poor things were too dumb to know anything about life."

So what is it? A story? An anecdote? A fragment? A poem without line breaks? Does it matter as long as it touches the reader—the reason I chose it. It may look easy. A hundred words? Ha! Until you try to write one. It's like trying to write a decent sonnet

Given the varying lengths and worlds of these 28 stories it is inevitable that readers (this reader) will respond more positively to some than others. I especially enjoyed Faulkner's longer stories in which he has more room to develop characters and situations. I found something to respond to in almost every one 28 and, personally more valuable, something that provoked an idea, a character, a situation.

Thank you Black Lawrence Press for sending me a copy.

The summer house is not only a seasonal retreat

Masashi Matsuie's debut novel The Summer House, skillfully translated by Margaret Mitsutani, is interesting on several levels. Readers learn a great deal about architecture and how an architect thinks about a building, about life in a small Japanese firm, about Japanese attitudes toward change, about changing Japanese society and more.

Although from the information in the book one would think that Matsuie's background is architecture, he was a fiction editor for Shinchosha Publishing, where he launched Shincho Crest Books, an imprint specializing in translations of foreign works. The Summer House received the Yomiuri Prize for Literature, an award that normally goes to seasoned authors who are well along in their careers. 

Tōru Sakanishi narrates the story as a middle-aged man recalling the past. When the book opens, he is a recent university graduate joining the prestigious Murai Office, a nine-person architecture firm founded by Shunsuke Murai, a former student of Frank Lloyd Wright. Although the firm does not ordinarily enter architectural competitions, Murai decides to compete for the design of a National Library of Modern Literature. It  competes against a larger firm that obtains one government project after the next, and the library design thread runs through the novel.

As the sweltering summer months approach, the Murai Office migrates from Tokyo to Kita-Asama, a mountain village and artists’ colony whose heyday has passed. With tighter homes and air conditioning there is less reason to escape the rainy season in the mountains. The village faces Mt. Asama, an active volcano that regularly threatens to cover the landscape with cinders and ash, another thread running through the book. (The Japanese title of the novel can be translated At the Foot of the Volcano.) Despite living beside a volcano, the character seem blasé.

Years earlier Murai had built and then expanded a house in the village, the firm's summer home, making it large enough to shelter the staff and where the architects––including two women Sakanishi is attracted to––begin working on a library design. Murai charges the firm's two senior architects each to come up with a design; he will select and modify the one he thinks is best. So while there is competition within the firm, the loser does not appear to have any ill feelings.

The Summer House is engaging and believable because the characters are affecting and plausible. They act in ways that are understandable even as the environment, technology, and society change in time around them. 

"I found myself in a dark wood, the direct way lost . . . "

 I'm not sure what to make of Jon Fosse's short novel A Shining.

Fosse is a Norwegian author, translator, and playwright. He was awarded the 2023 Nobel Prize in Literature. Born in 1959, he has written over seventy novels, poems, children's books, essays, and theatre plays which have been translated into over fifty languages. 

Several of his novels have been described as post-modernist and avant-garde literature due to their minimalism, lyricism and unorthodox use of syntax. The Bergens Tidende reported in 2005, "Few and often nameless characters, little external action and a great deal of linguistic repetition, Jon Fosse writes in all literary genres, but his drama in particular has enjoyed fabulous international success." A Shining is a relatively painless introduction to his work if only because it's short.

We spend all 74 pages in the head of a nameless character who, bored, drives aimlessly until his car becomes stuck on a narrow forest road. He does not know where he is. He does not know where to find help. He has no cellphone. It's cold. It grows dark. He leaves the car but does not follow the road but wanders aimlessly in the forest until he's lost. It snows. He sees a shining . . . something. He sees his dead parents and talks to them. He sees a figure in a black suit, white shirt, black tie and barefoot. He somehow becomes barefoot himself. The book stops.

The language, a translation by one of my favorite translators Damion Searls, is relatively bland. Here is a sample taken at random: "For the shining presence's arm, if that's the right thing to call it, now felt something inseparable from my body, and to find out whether it was or not, to be able to find out, I would have to move, and that's exactly what I had no desire to do, or what it felt like I wasn't allowed to do. And this prohibition was binding and unalterable, that's how it felt." 

Because Fosse tells us so little about the narrator—his age, background, character, hopes, fears—the reader has none of the usual markers we use to understand the story. Because Fosse gives us so little and the narrator questions what he does think, we have to make up or own story (or throw the book against the wall). And perhaps that's the point. Rather than the author leading the reader, the point is offer conflicting, inexplicable clues and force readers to make of A Shining what they will.

It reminded me of, "In the middle of the journey of our life, I came to myself, in a dark wood, where the direct way was lost . . . ." Among the difference between Dante and Fosse is that Fosse's narrator has no guide—which I take as a comment on modern society—and no hope of redemption. He mentions God, but does not seem to believe that God (or a Virgil) can help him find his way.

A Shining provoked more thoughts and questions than most books. It is probably worth rereading and more thought, but there are so many other books I want to read, so many other things I want to learn, that once through was enough for me. Others will feel differently.

Strangers on a Russian train

The paperback novel Eastbound is deceptively modest. It's thin, only about 130 pages, and small, roughly 5 by 6 inches. It's more like a long short story or a novella than a free-standing novel. I'm impressed that the editor at Archipelago Books had the wit to acquire it and that The New York Times realized that it was worth reviewing as they did in 2023:

"When this brief lyrical novel was first published in France, in 2012, Russia’s war against Ukraine was no more than a psychotic gleam in Vladimir Putin’s eye. Today, Eastbound is a story of our time. In a book whose only battlefield is a cross-continental train, [the author] Maylis de Kerangal vividly evokes the Russian military’s disorder and brutality and the desperation of the men who have been forced to serve in it."

Virtually all of the action takes place on an eastbound Trans-Siberian train. There are two central characters,  Aliocha, a 20-year-old conscript who decides to desert rather than serve in Siberia, and Hélène, a French woman who decides to leave her Russian lover rather than live with him at a hydroelectric station in central Russia. Aliocha speaks no French; Hélène knows only a few words of Russian. Nevertheless, they connect under plausible circumstances and she decides to help him evade his vicious sergeant on the train.

Because Aliocha and Hélène cannot speak the novel has virtually no dialogue. We learn almost everything we know about the people and their situation by what they do and what de Kerangal tells us in Jessica Moore's smooth translation: "These guys come from Moscow and don't know where they're going. There's a crowd of them, more than a hundred, young, white—pallid, even—wan and shorn, their arms veiny and eyes pacing the train car, camouflage pants and briefs, torsos caged in khaki undershirts, thin chains with crosses bouncing against their chests, guys lining the walls in the passageways and corridors, sitting, standing, stretched out on the berths, letting their arms dangle, their feet dangle, letting their bored resignation dangle in the void."

While those sentences, the first two in the book, engaged my interest initially, I did not expect to become so invested in Aliocha and Hélène, to care about them as much as I did. The details of the train, the characters, the passing landscape all ring true. I believe that a young Russian conscript and an older French woman would, in a similar situation, act the way Aliocha and Hélène did.  An extraordinary book.

Eleven-year-old Flavia de Luce solves another one

 A Red Herring Without Mustard, published in 2011, is Alan Bradley's third Flavia de Luce mystery. He published the first, The Sweetness at the Bottom of the Pie, in 2008 when he was 68 years old. A former radio and television engineer and screenwriter, he'd published a memoir and non-fiction book when his wife suggested he write something new about the "girl on the camp stool," a minor character who had emerged in the novel he was working on. 

He entered the UK's Debut Dagger contest by submitting fifteen pages about the girl, now named Flavia de Luce, and an outline for the mystery. Bradley, a Canadian, set the book in England despite having never been there. The book won and eleven-year-old Flavia was so popular there are now a dozen mysteries in the series, the most recent published in 2024 although Flavia has not aged.

The books are set in the fictional English village of Bishop's Lacey in 1950. Flavia lives with two older sisters and her father, the family man-of-all-work Dogger, and the part-time housekeeper and cook Mrs. Mullet in a decaying manor home called Buckshaw. Flavia's dad, Colonel de Luce, passes most of his time alone, collecting stamps and listening to music. Ophelia, the eldest sister, prides herself on her appearance and spends most of her time, according to Flavia, looking in the mirror. Daphne, the middle sister, has her nose stuck in a book. Flavia's mother died during a mountain-climbing trip in Tibet when Flavia was small, and her dad has managed to hold the family together although money is tight and the large, decaying country house needs major repairs. 

Flavia narrates the two books in the series I've read. Can you say "precocious"? Although she does not seem to have gone to school, she has absorbed books in the house's extensive library and taken as her own the laboratory in the house that some dead ancestor set up. She knows a great deal of chemistry with a special interest in poisons and will use the knowledge to torment her sisters and solve murders.

Can you say "nosy"? Flavia is willing to poke about Buckshaw, its extensive grounds, the village of Bishop's Lacy, and the surrounding area in an effort to understand—unravel—a series of incidents. In A Red Herring Without Mustard these include a bashed gypsy woman, a dead baby, a dead forger hung on a statue, and much more. Indeed, some readers complain that there is too much.

Can you say "fearless"? Perhaps because she is only eleven Flavia cannot visualize being harmed except possibly by her sisters who early in Red Herring put a sack over her head, throw her into the basement, and interrogate her. Ophelia and Daphne know how to scare her, but Flavia knows how to revenge herself. Nevertheless, she has a moral sense. She knows right from wrong and does her best to do right.

If any of this sounds like it appeals—and it must appeal to a great many people or there wouldn't be a book series, plus a TV series and a movie in production—and if you haven't read Flavia's stories, you might give it a try. Bradley says he feels no difference in approach to writing children’s stories and lifestyle and arts columns to writing adult stories. “In all of these genres—I hate that word!—there’s a need to avoid nastiness and to write from a pure heart. There are enough problems in the world without inventing more. The Golden Age detective story is arm’s-length enough from reality to fulfill the reader’s need for gruesomeness, without any real offense.” 

Making a better world in rural New Zealand

Eleanor Catton tells her story Birnam Wood by means of four points of view: Mira, Shelley, Tony, and Robert Lemoine. There are couple others but they are minor. One of the novel's pleasures is the way Catton shifts point of view without chapter breaks and without losing the reader.

The novel is set in New Zealand's fictional Korowai National Park and a farm that abuts it. "Birnam Wood" is the name of an ecological (essentially communist), activist collective that plants vegetables wherever the members can get away with doing so—friends' yards, vacant lots, and public lands where they won't be noticed. They sell, eat, and donate the produce.

Although Birnam Wood is ostensibly leaderless, 29-year-old Mira, a trained horticulturalist, is the leader and one of the founders. Shelley is a little younger than Mira and another founder; if Mira is the group's spark plug Shelley is the oil that keeps it running smoothly. Tony, and another founder, has been in Mexico teaching English for the five years before the book opens. He's back, at loose ends, and uneasy about reconnecting with Birnam Wood because his departure for Mexico was awkward. 

Robert Lemoine, in his mid-40s, is an American billionaire, a founder of Automoto, a Silicon Valley technology company that, among other things manufactures drones. Lemoine plans to buy the farm and build a bunker that will withstand the nuclear winter that comes with nuclear war. Beware of Americans bearing checkbooks.

The book is a pleasure because each character clearly wants something and tries to get  it. Mira wants to put Birnam Wood on a solid financial base; if it improves the world so much the better. Shelley wants to stop playing second fiddle to Mira and do something else. Idealistic Tony wants to write an article that will expose the corruption and perfidy of New Zealand's government. Lemoine wants to increase his billions. What the characters do—or don't do—to obtain what they want leads plausibly and naturally to conflict.

Birnam Wood is worth reading slowly to savor Catton's writing, long blocks of prose broken by spurts of dialogue. She includes descriptions of events in the characters' biographies, but I never bumped on these as data dumps or "exposition"; somehow the memories, histories, past events felt natural as I reached them. The book is interesting also for Catton's ability to evoke the New Zealand landscape and the three young characters' feelings about the country. Birnam Wood from the title to the last sentence is a remarkable piece of fiction.

One account of student life in a Kyoto university

Given my interest in Japan and things Japanese with a special interest in the literature, I wanted to like Tomihiko Morimi's The Tatami Galaxy translated by Emily Balistrieri. I really wanted to engage with . . . learn from . . . enjoy the novel.

Balistrieri is a Morimi fan. She discovered him one day when she realized she didn't have a book to read on a train. "I went into the bookstore inside the JR gate at Shinjuku Station for a quick fix. Swayed by the cute cover and the fact that it won a science fiction prize, I picked up Morimi's Penguin Highway (now available in English translation by Andrew Cunningham). After finishing it, I went straight to another bookstore and bought every single title by Morimi they had."

A generally favorable comment about The Tatami Galaxy by Gianni Washington concludes, "The decision to leave the narrator without a name was wise as he is clearly a proxy (a term you will come across repeatedly in this book) for all of us. He discovers that it is never too late to live a better life, even if that life doesn’t look exactly the way you think it should. A combination of making the best of what is and keeping your eyes wide open for the next opportunity, however small, is Morimi’s simple, yet potent recipe for positive change. No matter your stage of life, it’s fool-proof."

The book may make that case but I'll never know. I couldn't finish.

The text has four parts. Each part appears to cover the same events and involve the same characters with relatively small changes. The protagonist narrator is a junior in an unnamed Kyoto university. (Morimi attended Kyoto University.) He lives in a run-down dormitory and appears to have only one friend, Ozu.

"Because [Ozu] hated vegetables and ate only instant foods, his face was such a creepy color it looked like he'd been living on the far side of the moon. . . Ozu kicked those who were down and buttered up anyone stronger than him. He was selfish and arrogant, lazy and contrary . . . There was not a single praiseworthy bone in his body." With a friend like that, who needs enemies?

The narrator, who seems to have no parents, siblings, or relatives whines repeatedly that his university experience is not what he anticipated. I was willing to stick with him through the first section, became impatient in the second section which repeats word for word paragraphs from the first section, and gave up in the third when it appeared the author was going to cover essentially the same material with small variations.

This is not Rashomon in which different narrators give different versions of the same event. The narrator in The Tatami Galaxy does not seem to change much in each section. But again, don't hold me to this because I read only the first two and the beginning of the third. I am sure other, more patient readers, will do better. 

Don't speak of the abuse. Keep the usual silence

An acquaintance of mine, Jenny Milchman, has published a new mystery, The Usual Silence. Drawing on her own background Jenny has created an engaging new protagonist, a psychologist who treats troubled children.

Jenny writes that when she was nine years old and walking with her younger brother in her suburban town "I felt something from behind. A hand where it should not have been on my body." She didn't know what was happening but "something felt very, very wrong. Whoever was behind me continued to trail along at our heels. Not letting himself be seen. And not letting go."

The children ducked into a pet store where there was a clerk and pretended to browse until the man—it was a man—left. Back home Jenny told her parents who called the police. "I remember driving around in a cop car, although we never saw the man. I didn’t recall what he looked like well enough to give a reliable report. I now realize how lucky I am in many ways."

Jenny's new creation, Arles Shepherd, treats troubled children while struggling to recover from her own traumatic past, much of which she's lost over time. Jenny writes "Arles is a character who’s good at amplifying the voices of her clients, but struggles with speaking up for herself. It’s a daily battle for her, but one she intends to win. So she fights. Every day. And when the biggest danger of all appears, at the end of the story, she is ready.

"Arles had to fight bigger battles than I did, if such rankings should even be a thing. I admire her greatly for what she survived, just as I admire every survivor out there. And I think we all can play a role in encouraging each other to speak up."

Arles has set up a new kind of treatment center in the Adirondack mountains and The Usual Silence involves two mysteries. One is a ten-year-old local boy who has never spoken a word—or so his mother believes. The other is a twelve-year-old girl a couple hundred miles south who gets off the school bus one afternoon—and vanishes. No clues, no witnesses and the police are baffled. 

One of the many satisfactions of the book, and there are a great many, is how Jenny finally connects the events downstate with the center in the Adirondacks. She writes that her own memory as a menaced nine-year-old "lives on, decades later, as poison. It’s a there-but-for-the-grace-go-I memory for me. I think of those who have faced encounters that didn’t end so well. That’s maybe why I wrote my book. I wrote myself into it and what could’ve been if it hadn’t turned out as it did." Readers of The Usual Silence will be pleased it does.

An evocation of a certain upper class Indian life

Although Mr. Niyogi’s Last Audit is set in Bengaluru, a large city in southern India, there is nothing particularly “Indian” about the story other than the names: Kiran Singh, Mr. Niyogi’s associate; Archana, his daughter; Ramani, his wife; Mr. Saran, the chairman of Saran Airlines, his former employer, and more. With small tweaks it could have been set in New York, London, or Tokyo.

Mr. Niyogi, now retired and plagued by Parkinson’s disease, had grown elderly as Saran Airlines had grown into an international travel conglomerate where Mr. Niyogi was the lead  accountant. Archana learns that a friend’s son has been stranded with 200 other miners on a tiny island in the Maldives when their employer went bankrupt. Can Mr. Niyogi do something?

It seems unlikely. Author S.N. Rao describes the effects of Parkinson’s, which cannot be cured. Palliative measures can give some brief relief, and the author describes these—twice. It’s an ugly, mortifying way to die.

Mr. Niyogi. troubled by a mysterious voice begging him for help escaping the island, comes up with a plan. I was troubled by this supernatural voice and think the author missed an opportunity to make more of it and its effect on Mr. Niyogi.

I was also troubled by Mr. Niyogi’s decision to hide his plan from his loving wife. It requires his daughter’s collusion, and he tells her, her mother “is already under a lot of stress worrying about my health. I don’t want to put her under more stress. As much as I want to do this, I don’t know if I will have the courage if your Mom is completely against it.” This may be an Indian thing, but I don’t think so.

Finally, a small thing. I bumped on the written formality when people talk. ““I did not [rather than ‘didn’t’] want to trouble you any more than I already have, and that is [that’s] why I kept it hidden from you too all this time. But now I need your help, and there is [there’s] no one else I can ask.” Perhaps this is the way an elderly Indian man would talk to his daughter, but it runs through the book and sounds stiff and unnatural.

Nevertheless Mr. Niyogi’s Last Audit is an interesting evocation of a certain upper class Indian life.